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Friday, September 28, 2012

Stomach Churning

One day at the Fun park, this young boy and his friends went to this amusement park. When they got there the young boy was a bit afraid that he was going to go on the big roller coaster called “ The big monster “. when they finished all of the rides he got a bit sick of all of the candy and soft drinks.

When it was nearly closing time there was only one ride to go on, The big monster. He was very scared but his friends were so excited to ride the roller coaster. he tried to get off the ride by saying “ I need to go toilet “. but they didn’t let him.

He went on the roller coaster and then he got frightened to go down. Then his friends were saying “   don’t be scared “. Face frowning, stomach churning and heart pumping. He got sick a vomited on his friends and all of the people on the ride. They were saying “ okay that’s enough for today”. Then they went home.


Thank you Kevin

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