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Friday, September 28, 2012

Stomach Churning

One day at the Fun park, this young boy and his friends went to this amusement park. When they got there the young boy was a bit afraid that he was going to go on the big roller coaster called “ The big monster “. when they finished all of the rides he got a bit sick of all of the candy and soft drinks.

When it was nearly closing time there was only one ride to go on, The big monster. He was very scared but his friends were so excited to ride the roller coaster. he tried to get off the ride by saying “ I need to go toilet “. but they didn’t let him.

He went on the roller coaster and then he got frightened to go down. Then his friends were saying “   don’t be scared “. Face frowning, stomach churning and heart pumping. He got sick a vomited on his friends and all of the people on the ride. They were saying “ okay that’s enough for today”. Then they went home.


Thank you Kevin

Wednesday, September 12, 2012


Jesus told Peter to walk on the water to him and Jesus said Peter, come to me and you will be safe. he put one foot into the water, it sank but Jesus told him to believe in him so he looked at Jesus and only Jesus and he put the other foot over the side of the boat and he was floating.

His crew was amazed by Peter floating on the water. Peter started to look down and he started not believing in him so he started to sink. He was very scared and then Jesus said to Peter grab my hand and you'll be okay so he grabbed his hand and floated again.