The crowd was ecstatic to see the legendary all blacks go on the field to go to the 2011 rugby world cup to challenge the best teams of the world. The first team the all blacks were facing the fearsome Tongans. The All Blacks fans were going crazy for the all blacks to win. The all blacks beat the Tongans with an dominating 41-10.
The agresiveness of the all blacks were superb. Trying to scare the other teams with there haka.they were leaving red marks all over there chest and there legs very agressively.when they do the pukana they say blah!! and the crowed goes wild. Yelling at outrageous levels of fury!!! they growl to the feild.
When the Tongan team got to the airport and there were 5,000 Tongans waiting for them to come. They did there Tongan dance to the fans of Tonga. Over 5,213 flags were waving around like a cyclone.
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